haiku in english run 3 lines, in a 5-7-5 syllable pattern.
japanese haiku run one line with the same sound pattern.
that said, a haiku should mention a season of some sort which mine doesn't have...
update: kev drank with co-workers on wed. and didn't feel like hitting joe's booze-a-palooza later on. that was cool with me. it's hard to leave joe's on steady legs.
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I thought Haiku's had to be four lines?
Oh and happy b-day Kevin maybe you'll wander out for drink this weekend?
haiku in english run 3 lines, in a 5-7-5 syllable pattern.
japanese haiku run one line with the same sound pattern.
that said, a haiku should mention a season of some sort which mine doesn't have...
update: kev drank with co-workers on wed. and didn't feel like hitting joe's booze-a-palooza later on. that was cool with me. it's hard to leave joe's on steady legs.
happy belated
i hope it was a good one
that is an haiku
the tease
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